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Lower Level (aka Downside)
More melancholy, the elusive nature of love. Missing it, wanting it, trying to find it.
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More poetry. This time it's a darker side of love.
The heartbreak, the heartache, the searching, the wandering, the loneliness.



Portfolio -> Whims of a Poet -> The Forsaken Garden -> Lower Level (aka Downside)

Swing  [ASR]   0.7 KB
Mood swings also fall into Newton's third law...

Forsaken  [E]   0.7 KB
of all things, I am forsaken

Dream of Life  [E]   0.8 KB
I dream a life I do not have.

It's not my imagination  [ASR]   1.1 KB
somethings are not in your imagination

The Play  [ASR]   0.9 KB
It was all make believe

Resolute  [E]   0.7 KB
Some resolution are kept without being made.

The Other Woman  [ASR]   0.9 KB
sometimes you just can't tell

Here or gone  [E]   0.7 KB
I'm not sure if you're here or gone.

Recovery  [ASR]   0.5 KB
starting the recovery process

Don't leave me here  [ASR]   0.6 KB
lyrical piece about being left alone

Looking back.  [E]   0.6 KB
things always look different when you look back.

Promises  [ASR]   0.7 KB
promises only go so far.

Missing you.  [ASR]   0.6 KB
always missing you.

It's really hard.  [ASR]   0.5 KB
every day is a trial.

One more...  [ASR]   0.5 KB
Just one more...

Twisting  [ASR]   0.6 KB
sleepless night that haunts

Confused Misgivings  [ASR]   0.7 KB
Is it possible to understand?

If only...  [E]   0.9 KB
would things be different?

Waiting  [E]   0.6 KB
waiting for a moment, waiting for too long

Visions of you  [E]   0.7 KB
leftover visions of what you were

What happened to forever?  [E]   0.8 KB
he promised forever...

It Ain't Me  [E]   1.0 KB
I can never be anything but me

Sister, Tell me Kindly, Tell me True  [E]   4.3 KB
unspoken trials of an older sister leading up to sharp misunderstandings.

Reminder  [13+]   0.3 KB
A reminder of how close and how far we are from are lost loved ones.

Hoping and Waiting  [13+]   0.6 KB
Hoping and waiting for a love who's left.

The Nights  [13+]   0.3 KB
The coldness and loneliness of the nights.

Midnight Dream  [13+]   0.6 KB
beauty and sadness of a dream

Carnations  [13+]   0.9 KB
air laced with the smell of carnations, darkness held only one thing

Reaching  [13+]   1.1 KB
pushing through the night of loneliness

Searching  [13+]   1.0 KB
you're searching for something, you're so close you can feel it...

Loneliness  [E]   0.6 KB
short poem, oppressiveness of loneliness

Awaken  [E]   0.6 KB
Short poem, bittersweet love of a dream. Sequel to "Midnight Dream".

Here in my heart  [E]   2.3 KB
Poem about the endurance of love