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  >> Folder >> Sci-fi >> ID #1017005  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Where Do You Go When You're Not Here
"I walked in on your death, and it made me a ghost."
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Sometimes, after a jump you're not stable. Sometimes, you should stay in one place until the feeling passes. Because what could happen if you see what you're not supposed to see? What happens when you look and you see and it throws you out and you fall out of place? Where do you go, then? Where are you then, when you have no control?
Portfolio -> Where Do You Go When You're Not Here

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This is where it starts

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What do you hear, when they don't think you're there?

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Everything hits at once

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From the side, I don't remember you smiling

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There's no plot here. Please move along.

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This world is not my home, I'm just passing through

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I should be raising a toast to absent friends

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First interlude

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How long did you know?

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Debate hardly seems worth it, this is how it was

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You can't say unless you were there

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Special guest star!

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Earning the rating, gleefully

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Was it that long ago? That can't be right.

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Hey, you remember that night when we

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It was quiet on the last day

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Is this where it goes, so far away?

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Where did they all go?

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Finally, we have a conversation

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Finally - a coda