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Magik-First Book of The Kindered
my new paranormal book a WIP
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This is the first draft, no real spell check just writing to get the story down.
All editing is appreciated but it is the first draft, I mostly want Character definition, continuity, plot line and interest. Does the story flow? Does it have enough detail about the people?
Portfolio -> WIP -> Magik-First Book of The Kindered

Chapter 1  [18+]   27.2 KB
Colin must protect a woman and her daughter from his arch enemy chpt1

part 2 of chpt 1  [18+]   17.3 KB
Colin at the fair

chapter 2  [18+]   11.4 KB
Ondi reminises

Chapter 3  [18+]   15.7 KB
Colin returns to Homestead to regroup WIP rough thoughts

Chapter 4  [18+]   19.9 KB
Ondi on the run

Chapter 5a  [18+]   13.9 KB
Colin rescues Ondi and Chandra

chapter 5b  [18+]   13.5 KB
Colin confronts Ondi and gives her a choice