Not quite finished on paper yet, but I do have one wind-down working in my head.
Comments appreciated.
Next edit of Ghetto Gandhi, I need to make the characters plainer, easier to follow. There are too many names and families to keep up with, even worse as it goes on . . . and now I can see that because . . . . . . a reviewer suggested that very point to me. What a gift is such a great and useful review.
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Write on!
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. . . a reviewer suggested that very point to me. What a gift is such a great and useful review. 
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