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Book 1: Passage into Darkness
A fantasy novel that I finished writing. Please comment on a chapter or the tale overall.
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Whelp, this novel is finally complete! I'm so excited! The revisions are done, and I hope to have the chapters re-posted on here soon. I have sent it off to a total of three companies, and I received rejections from Wizards of the Coast, Last Knight Publishing, and EDGE Fantasy Publishing. I'm currently looking into sending it off to a new company once I finish my last revisions. Feel free to leave any comments as I adore them. It will help me out a lot, since I am very serious about getting this work polished and published. Please try not to send your comments annonymously, because I would really want to message you back! Thanks!

Synopsis: The quiet town of Oneria is attacked late in the night and the princess is kidnapped. Having no other alternative, King Gregory Delencor turns to others for help and assembles a group of heroes to go out and return his daughter. Seems simple enough, right? Things don't go quite as planned as things get twisted and turned upside down time and time again, leading the heroes of the story down a path that none of them want to take.
Portfolio -> The War of Fallen Heroes -> Book 1: Passage into Darkness

Chapter 20: Statue  [13+]   16.5 KB
Grom returns to Oneria, where a celebration is waiting for him...

Chapter 19: The Seal  [13+]   19.5 KB
Having lost Cloey, Prescott and Grom move ahead to stop Astaroth's evil plans...

Chapter 18: The Dragon's Belly  [13+]   23.2 KB
The heroes fight their way to the dark castle in Mortillus...

Chapter 17: The Blackened Isle  [13+]   22.1 KB
Can Grom, Prescott, and Cloey find their way to Mortillus?

Chapter 16: The Volcano  [13+]   28.2 KB
Grom and his companions travel into the depths of the volcano and find...

Chapter 15: The Man in Black  [13+]   29.9 KB
A man in black armor is sighted heading toward the volcanic mountains...

Chapter 14: Loss  [13+]   22.0 KB
Pain sets over the group and they are left without a path to follow...

Chapter 13: Mountain Path  [13+]   39.4 KB
The heroes follow the clues in hopes of finding Cloey. However, what they do find...

Chapter 12: Mysterious Clues  [13+]   26.0 KB
Clues are left behind after Cloey's abduction. Where will they lead the heroes?

Chapter 11: Anon  [13+]   31.5 KB
The heroes travel to Anon in hopes of finding answers about the amulet.

Chapter 10: Reunion  [13+]   24.1 KB
The heroes reunite and the amulet is revealed to all.

Chapter 9: Trinket  [13+]   25.7 KB
Grom's fate seems grim. Can he find a way to escape the orcs?

Chapter 8: Imprisoned  [13+]   32.6 KB
Prescott awakes to find himself and his companions imprisoned by wild elves.

Chapter 7: Revenge  [13+]   30.5 KB
Grom travels his own path to avenge King Gregory's death. Where will it lead him?

Chapter 6: Separate Paths  [13+]   23.1 KB
The heroes travel different paths. Prescott, Isac, and Shenk are left to investigate.

Chapter 5: Mourning  [13+]   19.3 KB
The town mourns the death of the king. Grom decides his path.

Chapter 4: The Return  [13+]   35.7 KB
The heroes return to celebrate Anne's rescue. They are not prepared for what they find.

Chapter 3: Rescue  [13+]   42.0 KB
And now the heroes embark to save Princess Anne. Will they be able to do so?

Chapter 2: The Gathering  [13+]   33.7 KB
Heroes unite in the audience of the king. An adventure awaits.

Chapter 1: The Silent Watch  [13+]   32.1 KB
Princess Anne is kidnapped, leaving an unlikely group of heroes to rescue her.