Thanks for taking a look

This is my first attempt at writing anything longer than a couple of pages. I can only hope that by the time I finish it will be a story well worth reading.

Any helpful suggestions, comments or advice would be more than appreciated.

I'm in the process of putting this into book form (for those that like smaller parts ) you can check that out here "Invalid Item"  if you're interested

Portfolio -> The Fog - Work in Progress

	+			#702233  The Fog Part 1  [18+]   32.6 KB A strange fog slowly closes in on a small town Genres: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense :: Supernatural Created: Jun 07 2003 at 11:30pm EDT Last Modified: Nov 28 2005 at 8:04pm EST
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	+			#703386  The Fog Part 2  [18+]   45.7 KB Group of people stranded - surrounded by strange fog. Genres: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense :: Supernatural Created: Jun 10 2003 at 7:58am EDT Last Modified: Oct 02 2005 at 12:18am EDT
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	+			#709042  The Fog Part 3  [18+]   31.0 KB People stranded - surrounded by fog - trying to work out what is wrong in the town Genres: Horror/Scary :: Supernatural :: Thriller/Suspense Created: Jun 22 2003 at 2:08am EDT Last Modified: Oct 02 2005 at 1:14am EDT
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	+			#720018  The Fog Part 4  [18+]   22.2 KB What is stalking the town, one member of the group has vanished, who might be next? Genres: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense :: Supernatural Created: Jul 15 2003 at 7:44am EDT Last Modified: Sep 08 2004 at 12:54am EDT
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	+			#754046  The Fog Part 5  [18+]   19.5 KB It's closing in - can they figure it out in time? Genres: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense :: Supernatural Created: Sep 21 2003 at 12:10am EDT Last Modified: Mar 28 2005 at 5:06am EST
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	+			#770392  The Fog Part 6  [18+]   24.4 KB Who will make it out of Happy Valley Genres: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense :: Supernatural Created: Oct 27 2003 at 9:10pm EST Last Modified: Dec 13 2004 at 9:30pm EST
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