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Poetry
I don't write much poetry but this is where it's at!
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There once was a Scottie dog
Who liked to be a poet
She couldn't rhyme to save herself
And yet she didn't know it

Her attempts at imagery
Hurt far worse than her fleas
And yet she presents poems to you
Review them kindly please.

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I know the above is a fairly lousy rendition of poetry, but, er, it's supposed to be funny? *Confused*

I'm more of a short story gal, but I'd appreciate any feedback you could give!

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