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The Premonition
A darkness falls over RhyDin, leaving Munt and his friends to bring about peace.
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This is a fantasy novel that I began writing more than six years ago. I never got around to actually working on it too hard. I hope to lift it from the ground and actually do something with it.

I would greatly appreciate feedback when it comes to the chapters of this story. I want to do my best to write a great story and honest feedback is most welcome.
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Chapter 4  [13+]   21.8 KB
Munt, Sarry, and Dice travel to Sean's castle to seek answers to the attacks.

Chapter 3  [13+]   21.6 KB
The party comes to an unexpected end, and Munt tries to make sense of all the events.

Chapter 2  [13+]   19.6 KB
Munt's party falls to pieces as a darkness slips ever closer.

Chapter 1  [13+]   19.6 KB
Awakening from his dream, Munt plans a dinner for friends. It doesn't go as planned

Prologue  [13+]   3.5 KB
A dark dream haunts Muntjack. What is its true meaning?