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Est. February 8, 2010
Lilyflower
I am a mother of four boys and a book lover.even the bad ones. As a child watching my mom read, mostly fantasy, tuned me in to my own love of reading. As an adult, I love to read fantasy novels. A good romance on a rainy Sunday isn't bad, either and we have enough rain here in Indiana. I've decided recently to try my hand at writing and started looking for someone to critique it that is not family or friend. I'm not ready to put myself out there since writing is such a personal journey. That's where you all come in. Please critique my work and let me know if I stink so that I can save the world the injustice of another bad book. :)

Mersallee: Chapter 4  [13+]   8.5 KB
Not sure if this is the direction I want to go. Let me know if it works.

Mersallee: Chapter 3  [13+]   11.8 KB
Lily meets Rafe and realizes there's more there than meets the eye.

Mersallee: Chapter 2  [13+]   8.4 KB
Thanks to helpful suggestions, I've made changes to this chapter. Enjoy!

Mersallee: Chapter 1 (Title may change)  [13+]   6.9 KB
Thanks to great suggestions, I have made changes to this chapter. Hope it flows better.