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Last Online: 4/22/07

Est. April 7, 2007
I'm 25 and have been writing poetry for 15 years or so.. I just started writing songs recently.. Please give me feedback on what you read I want to know what others think. Thank you.

spell  [E]   1.9 KB
can you figure out what its about ?

dope dreams  [13+]   2.7 KB
about being addicted to heroin

Game  [E]   1.9 KB
another one.. feedback appreciated

Little Things  [E]   1.9 KB
another one.. feedback appreciated

Armageddon  [E]   1.9 KB
another one.. feedback appreciated

Just A Man  [E]   1.7 KB
another one.. feedback appreciated

Fathers Pain  [E]   2.1 KB
another one.. self explan.. feedback appreciated

No Matter  [E]   2.7 KB
another one.. feedback appreciated

Piece Of Me  [E]   1.8 KB
another song i wrote.. feedback appreciated

Fallen Star  [13+]   3.1 KB
song i wrote.. more posted soon.. feedback appreciated