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Est. April 30, 2007
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My name is Deb, and l live in rural Ohio. I wrote many years ago, but quit, due to having children and having to work. I have written a few poems and short stories in the past year, and I just want to share them and get feedback on how to improve my technique. I would love to hear all comments, good and bad.

Lost  [NPL]   0.8 KB
A poem of a love that is lost, for really no apparent reason.

Dreams  [E]   0.6 KB
this about the sadness and longing for a love that is gone.

why?  [E]   0.7 KB
when some dies and can prevent it and leaves their children behind

Saturday  [E]   0.7 KB
a love that was never really meant to be.