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Est. March 27, 2009
J.D. Vandalé
I am a college student at UCSB majoring in Literature through the College of Creative Studies. I am an aspiring writer and poet, working on my third novel. Maybe someday I'll work up the guts to put them up here. For now, I'll put poems I write up and hopefully I will get some feedback about them especially because in the future many will be assignments for school... so I appreciate all feedback, especially constructive criticism. Thank you all for taking an interest in my portfolio!

Lights, Camera, Action!  [E]   0.6 KB
About an actress, tell me what you think.

Mother, Daughter  [E]   2.2 KB
There's something that I do not like and I can't put my finger on it... suggestions?

Open, Shut  [E]   1.8 KB
This is a venting poem, so it's angry.

You  [E]   1.4 KB
Yes, it is happy and positive and corny and I like it that way.

Change   [E]   0.8 KB
Please give me some feedback! For the record, this was written long before Obama.