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Hello! I am an aspiring novelist currently working on my first novel. I am looking to gain some feedback on my work, as well as, other people's opinions. Negative feedback and opinions are also welcome.

Scene - 6 An Imminent War   [13+]   24.4 KB
A king's written will becomes forgotten words...at the moment that one man raises an army.

Scene - 5 The Benelovence of a Queen  [13+]   16.3 KB
Although confined and at her mercy, he still dares defy her.

Scene 4 - The Sanctum Of Magia  [13+]   29.4 KB
When knocking on the gates doesn't work, sneaking in is the way to go, at least, for him.

Scene 3 - Thieves at the Royal Palace  [13+]   46.7 KB
Dilan take the risk for a chance to revive his old days of love and thrills,and for what?

Scene 2 - Adventurer's Guild  [13+]   21.9 KB
Dilan and his companions visit the capital to sell what they found and then it all begins.

Scene 1 - The Dark Knowledge Stone:  [13+]   46.5 KB
Five adventurers desecrate the elf heaven, looking for rare gems, but end finding an evil.