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Est. April 8, 2008
Humpty Dumpty
Hi i haven't written in a while so my style is sorta rusty/bad but ive started again and hopefully i can get better. =] Please read it and review. If you could tell me how I could improve i would be greatly indebted.

Some Story ch. 5  [E]   1.9 KB
REALLY short and pointless.

Some story ch. 4  [E]   2.6 KB
another stort chapter.

Boom  [E]   4.6 KB
my first attempt at sci-fi but mainly just rambling. really short.

Some story ch. 3  [E]   3.0 KB
yay hes duke....yeah just random stuff...i like this chapter the best

sarah's story ch. 3  [E]   3.1 KB
first two chapters: http://zeyth.deviantart.com/art/My-story-chapters-1-and-2-68861248

Some story ch. 2  [E]   2.9 KB
really short continuation. =]

Some story ch. 1  [E]   3.9 KB
i havent written anything for years so my style is sorta rusty criticism is always welcome