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Est. March 6, 2010
newbewriter4u
I don't have my own computer. I get on when I can.

Go-Cart Racing  [E]   3.3 KB
Part 2 - A clever idea.

Go-Cart Racing  [E]   2.8 KB
Part 1 - I'm not a bad racer.

My block (scene discription2)  [E]   0.4 KB
This one is better ;) Description of the street his house is on.

My neighborhood (1st location details)  [E]   1.6 KB
This is my very first attempt at effective location details.

Ripped off (emotion attempt 2)  [E]   1.4 KB
This is my 2nd try at implied emotion.

The stand (1st attempt - emotion)  [E]   1.9 KB
This is my very first attempt at implied emotion. Critique away ;)

The tables turn (Daydream)  [E]   0.9 KB
This is an attempt at a brief action scene.

Story intro (attempt 2)  [E]   1.4 KB
This time I gave the intro some character.

he tricked me (facial description)  [E]   0.8 KB
1st person piece w/ main characters point of view. An attempt to get a facial description.

Intro to a story  [E]   0.4 KB
This is my first attempt at an effective story intro.