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I have been developing a fictional saga about a couple who are "unique contractors" for a Cajun mobster. I am seeking feedback on them. Please check out Moses and Curio on my profile. They are lurid, brutal, often funny little ditties about two mismatched people making a most dishonorable living!
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Moses and Curio   [18+]   8 Items
How the couple meets. I have cut it into sections per a reviewer's advice.

Moses & Curio & The Blizzard of '93   [18+]   6 Items
Moses and Curio are trapped in their crime scene by the infamous blizzard.

Moses and Curio and The Jaded Ex   [18+]   8 Items
Moses and Curio go to Texas to avenge a brutal kidnapping and rape of his ex-wife.

Moses & Curio Volume 1   [18+]   6 Items
A couple work as hired killers for a Cajun mobster in New Orleans.

Moses & Curio Volume 2: The Fontenots   [18+]   6 Items
After Curio is discovered to be working with Moses, the Fontenots learn to accept her.

Moses & Curio Vol.3 Paycheck to Paycheck   [18+]   6 Items
Curio begins to learn what Moses has always known, killing people leaves marks all over.

Moses & Curio Vol. 4: Requiem   [18+]   2 Items
After retiring from the life, vengeance calls the couple to West Texas, Moses' birthplace.

Moses and Curio  [18+]   194.6 KB
A hitman from Texas & a gorgeous Cajun runaway fall in love one day in New Orleans.

MOSES&CURIO & THE FLECHETTE BAYOU PACT  [18+]   91.8 KB
Fed up with sitting and worrying while Moses goes to work, Curio delivers an ultimatum.

Moses & Curio & The First Hammer to Fall  [18+]   89.8 KB
Curio's first contract killing with Moses.

Moses & Curio & The Hotlanta Sugah  [18+]   86.7 KB
Moses & Curio go to the ATL to take out a stripper for one of their bosses.

M&C & THE SWINDLER OF GROSSE TETE  [18+]   84.0 KB
Moses & Curio take out a double-crossing parish politician on a par-four in Louisiana.

Moses & Curio & The Gauthieux Twins  [18+]   106.7 KB
Against Moses' wishes, Curio unexpectedly meets the boss, Grizzly Fontenot.

Moses & Curio & The Table For Four  [18+]   70.0 KB
Moses & Curio have a sitdown with the bosses to discuss her existence in Moses' life.

Moses & Curio & The L.A. Cochon du Lait  [18+]   141.3 KB
A thug learns the hard way to make sure Moses is dead before raping Curio.

Moses & Curio & the C--- W/the Funny Hat  [18+]   126.5 KB
Moses & Curio are sent to dispatch the mistress of the MS Attorney General.

M&C & The Courtesan Ruby Jeansonne  [18+]   135.1 KB
Curio is jokingly initiated into the cajun mob by the boss's unique mother, Miss Ruby.

M&C & The Booty of Jean Lafitte  [18+]   91.9 KB
Moses & Curio find a lagniappe in Barataria after killing the snitch, Albie Aldridge.

Moses & Curio & Der Boswillig Stahl   [18+]   101.9 KB
Moses and Curio complete a job in the Florida Keys but have to await a package.

Moses & Curio and the Raving Wigger  [18+]   152.7 KB
Moses and Curio lure a thug-wannabe drug dealer to his death. Curio at play!

Moses & Curio & The Blizzard of '93  [18+]   167.7 KB
Moses and Curio are snowed in after a job in NE Alabama during the infamous blizzard.

Moses&Curio- The Black Sheep of Tel Aviv  [18+]   78.8 KB
Moses & Curio recount a recent job that sends Curio into a carnal frenzy.

Moses&Curio & Ebony-Ivory Bday Surprise  [18+]   122.7 KB
Curio experiences the highs and lows of working on her birthday.

Moses & Curio & Old Man River's Gimp  [18+]   182.2 KB
Moses & Curio are forced to take drastic measures to elude capture on the Miss River.

M&C-Return of Ba Lin Diep Thu's Cherry  [18+]   67.5 KB
A war crime Moses and Grizzly were involved in comes back to the fore.

Moses and Curio and the Jaded Ex  [18+]   232.3 KB
Moses and Curio take on a drug cartel member in west Texas

The Curse of Hermano Duermo part 1  [18+]   149.7 KB
The end of the saga. Moses&Curio square off with a depraved cartel hitman sent after them.

The Curse of Hermano Duermo pt 2  [18+]   125.9 KB
The second part of the Curse of Hermano Duermo. The saga ends.

"Dropping When You're Dead"  [13+]   29.7 KB
Gallows Humor so to speak. A man decides to go out on his terms.

The Trevella Counsel (Prologue)  [E]   41.1 KB
Extraterrestials introduce themselves, by warring with each other in the skies above us.

Poems  [13+]   47.5 KB
Cut and pasted poetry of mine.

5 July 1863  [18+]   24.1 KB
A last letter home from the front...

Something Old, Something New  [18+]   31.9 KB
Two young women, best friends, discover benefits. With awkward consequences.

the transparent stimulus  [18+]   19.2 KB
Drinking buddies tell of past sexual encounters.

The Package Store  [18+]   26.3 KB
An afterwork dash for a bottle of wine to enjoy alone turns into much more fun.

Fire For Effect excerpt Ch 33-36  [18+]   49.3 KB
Another excerpt of my first manuscript. Fast-action in this one.

better living thru chemistry  [18+]   14.9 KB
A rave turns into an erotic pillaging of a woman on the dance floor.

Davy and Evie  [18+]   44.6 KB
A young man loses his virginity after a cattle drive in 1877 Wyoming.

The Blind Date  [18+]   5.1 KB
A naughty flash fiction piece.

A Natural Occurence in Seclusion  [18+]   53.2 KB
outdoors sex fantasy

The Foggiest Notion  [13+]   19.7 KB
A man out to murder his ex gets an unusual comeuppance.

Just Because You're Paranoid...  [13+]   1.8 KB
three hundred words or less...

"Fire For Effect" Chapter 50  [18+]   22.6 KB
Randy Hiller battles the remaining jihadis and the rain-swollen Cacapon River.

"Fire For Effect" Chapter 30  [18+]   6.5 KB
The jihadis ready to strike a concert in WV with a mortar firing chemical rounds.

"Fire For Effect" Chapter 27  [13+]   4.9 KB
A CIA photo analyst luckily spots an Iranian sub landing a strike team on N. Carolina.

sensual thoughts  [18+]   11.9 KB
some extended texts i send to my lady friends