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Est. March 4, 2005
UnrequitedDreams
Here is where I will post pieces about which I would like some feedback, mostly for school assignments. If you could please leave me your most critical feedback, I would really appreciate it! Please don't be afraid to be brutal. I need that.

Tryst  [13+]   6.6 KB
Two soldiers, breaking military law. Sexy. Please leave critical feedback!

Busted  [13+]   4.4 KB
Shortened to 750 words. Please review! How is the style? Can you follow the events?

Hollow at the Core  [E]   1.5 KB
Written for school. Please let me know where its weak or if you have suggestions. Thanks!