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Est. October 9, 2007
Rettet
Hello all. On a whim, I've decided to post the first piece of creative writing I've produced since I was a child up for review. I wrote it just over a year ago during a particularly troubling time in my life, where it served as the only escape I had available. I love reviews, as most people do. Good or bad, the more feedback I recieve the better. Constructive criticism is just as appreciated as glowing praise, so don't think I'm one to be offended by critical comments. Thanks, -Jason

Unending  [13+]   29.3 KB
A pair of children from a small village are in for more than they ever imagined...