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Est. March 30, 2008
T Rock
Hi everyone! I am hoping to receive some genuine feedback on some of my writing. Friends and family all say that it's good, but they kind of have to say that right? Please feel free to give honest feedback. I mostly write poems, songs and short stories. Most of them are dark in nature, but this does not reflect who I am entirely. Just the side that needs a release. I hope you enjoy!

Wind, Ice, Prison, Snow, Rain  [E]   0.9 KB
A song without chorus, just five versus

Useless  [E]   1.1 KB
The only love song I've ever written

Forever Fallen  [E]   0.7 KB
The fall of childhood heroes. The definitive line between good and evil becomes grey

Yet ANOTHER set of random thought  [E]   2.0 KB
The title says it all. Colorful words used to express what we see everyday.

The Power of the Mind  [ASR]   5.3 KB
what would happen if we had full control of our brain?

Bleed  [13+]   0.7 KB
Do you see the meaning, or are they just words strung together?

Alone  [E]   0.6 KB
A paradox of the mind's limitations

A set of random thoughts  [E]   1.0 KB
Here are a set of thoughts that I believe trigger a different way of viewing the world