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Est. December 21, 2009
Wayfarer091
I am really into the ocean and Sci-Fi, also Fantasy books. I recently had the compulsion to try my hand at writing. I thought I would start with a story that has been rolling around in my head for some time. I posted the first chapter below and would very much like some criticism. Be as harsh as you like. This is my first time writing a story and I just want to get better.

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First chapter of a short story/book that i am working on. My first try at writing.