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Est. February 12, 2011
Hello, im just a high schooler right now but trying to write a story and any editing would help does not bother me if its bad advice or good advice either any advice would help to thanks

The Day The World Changed Ch1. (Revised)  [E]   13.8 KB
This is the revised version of Ch1. Comment and let me know what you think thanks :)

The Day The World Changed Ch. 2 ending  [E]   2.3 KB
The ending of chapter 2 any comments would be good thanks :)

The Day The World Changed Chapter 2  [E]   8.8 KB
What Happened to molly? Is she still alive or dead? the story continues...

The Day The World Changed  [E]   10.6 KB
This is about a Kid losing his sister, let me know what you think :)