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Est. May 6, 2007
Brad Davies
I am still trying to gain control of my voice and would appreciate any criticism you may have to offer. Don't worry about hurting my feelings by saying "this part sucks" or something of the like. But I may counter your comments with a few of my own. I am here to discuss my own work as well as the work of others, so I have no problem with strict criticism. I am becoming more interested in the minimalist styles of Hemmingway and Ray Carver, so please give advice or criticism with that in mind.

Dance For Me  [------]   1.0 KB
Good Poetry

Somebody Has To Stop It  [13+]   3.3 KB
A flash fiction piece. Read and find out.

Not One  [E]   1.1 KB
Speaks for itself.

Whisper Her Name  [E]   0.9 KB
Inner Experience

Born  [13+]   0.6 KB
I will describe this one as "An Infant Witness."

Life and Art  [E]   6.0 KB
A man finds a muse or rather the muse finds him. Flash Fiction

Memory  [E]   4.1 KB
A man and the memories that circle his life. Falsh Fiction.

The Tongue  [E]   2.5 KB
The exploration of perspective and how easily it is lost. Flash Fiction.

The Ants  [E]   3.6 KB
A relation to the struggles of the insects. A metaphor driven piece of Flash Fiction.

Wake Me Up  [13+]   11.7 KB
A story of life and art and how often the two overlap.