Another poem that I hashed out in a steno pad that I likely will never finish...

Shadows/There's No Meaning In The End

The weight of objects on light
gives a meek soul fright (right there, see, cliche)
You could step out at night (why am I forcing the rhyme scheme here)
and still feel their shadows.

When truth is a burden
not something you overcome
a restless mind is undone (yech!)
They keep calling; you still run

Your soul's wrecking ball swings within
Dreams seem gaunt and thin
Words clutter an empty din (? forcing again?)
You flutter because you fall (mixing metaphors)

Inside hell, you soar once more
Feathers aflame, you lie, you blame (really? a phoenix?)
you rise to some arbitrary safe haven
rest, then wait to die __________
why do you try? (yes, why do you?)


Perhaps the musings in the lines gives an insight into how hard I am on myself when I pen these little ditties. I want more out of my self -- to dive deeper and find some substance below the issues that plague and force me to take up pen and perish and rise again and fall again. I struggle with why I write these poems that seem more a waste of time. I should be working on fiction, but find these diversions in the way my children find games to play before their chores and homework.

I would like to be more disciplined as a writer. I do not want my inner struggles with the why I write conundrums to take center stage. I know that I do grow as a writer each time I fly and crash. There's always some message to be deciphered from the wreckage. For once, I'd like to stay in flight and enjoy the rhapsody. I would like to indulge in pity and self-loathing and needn't feel ridiculous or remorse for creating some kind of martyrdom about my life.

I want to feel like I am the only person who struggles and that no one understands me. And then, if someone understands, then I feel like, finally, I'm reaching someone outside of myself.

Why do I write? To connect. Do I write because I want to be published and famous? Ultimately, no, but it would be nice if it works out in the end. Do I get there by writing poetry? I'm back to where I started, knowing my little game with myself. Poetry is a simple byproduct of what I exude. And, if I can't wrap my head around a novel, then I'm going to have to try a little harder to squeeze one out. Poetry be damned!

Okay. I'm sure I'll be back in a few days with a few more lines I've hashed out. Guess I'll have to find humor in my idiosyncrasies.

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I wrote in my notebook today:

Epiphany: I'm never going to be naive again, and I miss that.
I felt more alive when I was vulnerable than the tired old skeptic I've become. Sticking with tried and true without the romance of taking a chance on something new doesn't mean you're wise but unwilling.
Note to self: Take a risk today.

Jaded is one word that comes to mind. Usually, when I see something unfolding, I'm already playing out the endgame in my mind. Apparently, I think I know everything about everything and I'm the prognosticator, the predictor of the future. In a world full of pundits (news and sports and around the table where you clutch coffee) people are know-it-alls. What do we know? History.

History for me is from personal experience, but only what I'm willing to take on. Because I take so few risks, calculated risks, I seldom get to peer into the maw of something so great it might consume me. I don't walk on high wires between tall buildings. I'm pretty sure I'm crossing wires laid on the ground. See what I can do? See what I know about?

Now, I do take risks when it comes to my limited vision. Stupidly. Like, driving when I shouldn't. Rollling around on the floor with the kids without my glasses on when I know I could take an unexpected blow to the head. Or, maybe, trying to read something in small print in a dimly lit office. (When am I going to start using those bifocals the doctor gave me/when am I going to figure out where I put them)

Putting my words out there. That's a risk. I'm afraid I can't write the novel. I make excuses because I don't know where I'm going with a story. I struggle with character development. Well, it's going to take time, research, organization. I might have to actually sit down and write an outline. Of course, the tried and true, when am I going to find time. I need some sort of writing routine. Nanowrimo actually forces you to realize the process with writing x-number of words a day and I don't even do that.

I could commit to writing like I do my daily trips to the gym. I could sit here and talk about all the ups and downs of jogging up and down a basketball court with guys half my age and younger who can actually see what there doing while I flail about trying to look what I know what I'm doing. But basketball is what I know and it is what makes me feel good about myself when I do play.

Writing is the cruel mistress among other cliches. We write because we love the game, but we seldom get to win. And, if we do, it's a little ditty of a poem that got an awardicon. I can proudly show off the little gems, put them all together in a collection and publish on Amazon, but it doesn't make me an accomplished writer. It reveals that I am not a risk taker. I didn't even commit my poetry to print...not even on demand. I just tell everyone I did it because my wife kept bugging me. But I'm on kindle direct publishing every day checking to see if I sold another copy. No, that's not success. That's not how you succeed. You win when you give it you best effort in the midst of the most horrible disaster and walk away from it unscathed and a little bit wiser.

I can sip on some brew and reread my failed efforts down the road and perhaps find a bit of myself. I might learn what I was thinking, or what my shortcomings were. I might find new inspiration, or new direction, that might lead me to some new goal. I might look back at this blog entry one day and think, 'okay, that was good. Let's take it a step further now.' Or, 'I can do any more with this. Time to move on to something new.'

Life is like Flip Wilson's 33 different flavors of ice cream: chocolate and vanilla. I can find another ice cream vendor and more flavors. Stop. See that's a bad metaphor, because I guarantee no one who reads this blog has experienced the stand-up comedian the way I did growing up. But, it is about understanding that even while we cannot relate to everyone, we can relate our thoughts to ourself to get a deeper understanding and appreciation of where we are as a writer. And, if you should happen to connect with someone else who reads this open diary to the world and they get what you are saying, that's topping for your frozen dairy treat.

So, experience something new and exciting. Take a chance on yourself. Learn from it and hopefully grow from it. And, maybe you meet someone else who might have even more insight and wisdom to help you transcend from where you are.

Transcend. That's the word. Ascension into a new dimension. Now we're writing....

Okay, now I'm done.

For now.



I reserve the right to reread and re-edit this post later.

Signed,
Some guy who thinks he's really smart right now....shhhh, don't wake him.

Thank you emoticons for saying/showing what I'm too lazy to express in words.

Stop!




 

Very pleasantly surprised to see my group Rising Stars awarded an old poem of mine:

ID: 1169069   (Rated: E) Soar   Like the tree, growing closer through faith that each tomorrow will come. by Brian Keith Compton

You know, being 6'2" has always seemed a shortcoming for one such as I who had dreams of basketball stardom. I think my limitations were all in my head when I felt I needed to be taller, at least 6'5", to make something of myself as a professional athlete. It would have made things easier for one who did not have the necessary/desired encouragement until it was too late to find himself among the redwoods on the hardwoods.

Now comes my son. He's always been a big boy and we did his height predictions early on that said he might be 6'5" when he's done growing. He's always been in the 99th percentile for height and weight. His mom and I are both tall and both enjoy basketball with the ability to teach him everything we know, but he has shown little interest so far.

For me, there wasn't much else to distract me growing up. It was basketball or baseball and cartoon programs were only shown on Saturday morning. My parents made me play outside every day until the sun went down. Not the same any more. Everyone is vying for our children's attention while my little one keeps growing out of his shoes as his feet turn flatter and pigeon-toed.

Recently, Alex had his yearly appointment with the doctor and we get his official measurements. I decided to do one more height predictor on Parents.com. The results only remind me how cruelly ironic parental expectations can become dashed.

Though he's 5'5" (and 1/4) and weighs 128 pounds on his 11th birthday, he apparently still has a lot of growing to do. Parents.com gave me the results with the message, "Congratulations! Your baby has a good chance of being 6'10" tall."

o_0

Why you gotta do me like that God? Can't I somehow impose my will for him that he might live out my dreams by being the basketball athlete I was with the potential to be something I wasn't. Even if he could play first string in college (for my ol' buddy Tom Izzo), it would be heaven sent.

We know we are not supposed to force our kids into life choices, but can't I steer him in this one direction...somehow, someway?

He's brilliant and could learn complex schemes: he's top 5% for his age group in math in the state of Wisconsin putting him in the accelerated program. He's an avid reader who won his school spelling bee. More than musically proficient, he's played piano since five and plays beautifully. I want a well-rounded life for him, rather than one washing dishes or raking coals from a furnace. He could have a college scholarship and the athletic life, if I could just get him off Star Wars and Legos and into a Packer's jersey and a pair of orthopedic high tops.

There's your irony.

Twist of fate that I should be the one pounding a ball into the floor three days a week in hopes of being in the best shape when he's ready for those one-on-one match-ups in our driveway. I'll stay the course a little longer, waiting for divine intervention. I needed someone to idolize growing up and found Lew Alcindor and Johnny Bench, but Darth Vader?! He's just made up.

I'm guessing the people who market icons nowadays find real people too disappointing or ordinary. If I could just unmask all the fake ones and show him a real role model, maybe there's a chance.

By the way, it's not me. I've taken him to the gym and let him watch me play. He just wants to leave 15 minutes after we arrive. If I could dunk the ball again like I did 25 years ago, I'm sure his chin would drop to the floor. But watching an old guy in goggles, patellar knee straps and bandana swishing a three-pointer doesn't cut it.

6'10?! I hope he doesn't expect any more piggy back rides.
 

Just sold another book bringing the total to seven. That puts me in the top 150,000 kindle titles. I sold five when "Such Longing" launched on Christmas day at the introductory 99 cent offering. I've sold the rest at 2.99. I'm going to read a few titles at our church program next month and may drop the price again in February. Stay tuned for an announcement on that.

I don't know how to promote myself, so I haven't done anything outside of this website and facebook. I thank you all for the support.

Can't do an author signing, and don't know if the local Barnes & Noble would have any ways to promote ebooks with local writers, so haven't tried to push the envelope to see what other opportunities are out there.

These poems have been on this website for some time and a few were new or revised. I am considering adding more to the collection, since I can update the book anytime I want. I can't imagine putting out another collection any time in the near future. But it is great fun to go through this process and see a few people pay to see my words.

It's all a writer can hope for...prying eyes into the poet's soul.

Time to put the kids to bed. Maybe more later?

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Another poem I'm working on...

Pressure
cedes true beauty
Pressure destroys
unhusks a gem
luffs off dead skin
that I devour
wish to live in
Who will destroy me
so I can gleam?

I'm thinking about also writing an ode to my chili. Seems an odd choice but there's something poetic about never following a recipe and only making it from scratch with whatever I've got to throw in the pot. And it always turns out great.

Live to write another day!
 

Words. Put them in a sentence. Put sentences together to make a point. And, collect all those points and they point to what? Well, if words and sentences are as aimless as mine....

I think each day about what I should write. I jot down ideas on scraps of paper that disappear for days and months on end only to be rediscovered in a cloud of confusion. What was I attempting?

I push myself to make a blog entry now about what I don't write. And, I think, it's because I think too much. I don't commit these thoughts to a more permanent format...like the blog...not to those lost scraps of incomplete wisdom.

I don't even know if what I'm writing now is going to go anywhere. I am writing for the exercise. And what I am also learning is that I need to read. I don't pick up books. It's easier to click on a computer or television and sit and wait to be entertained. I'm not wading through texts to find hidden gems. I'm not exercising that part of my brain that could create words with some direction.

Am I going to neatly tie up all these thoughts into some pearls of wisdom?



Okay, this is going nowhere. I can accept that. I should write and read more. I'll take that much away from what I've just wrote. Blog tomorrow? I have to kept the flame lit. Don't let the pilot light burn out, Brian.

Note to self: write a poem called "The Pilot Light". I challenge anyone reading this to try to do the same. If you beat me to it and do a better job, that will teach me to just idle on these thoughts.