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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Gothic >> ID #1003915  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
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Expression of negative self-destructive feelings.
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Avg Rating: (9)
The knife slices through the skin smooth and clean.
I thought it would be tough, like the skin of partially thawed bell peppers.

The deep red blood flows from the wound across my heart.
I thought it would spew, like rising water from a fountain outside a government building.

The pain is dull, but creeps with intensity –spreading..
I thought it would be numbing, like a shot of Novocain.

The life is fighting, twisting, screaming, yelling.
I thought it would be silent, like thieves in the night.

The scars grow ugly, thick and gnarled.
While the knife searches for more clear smooth skin.
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