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Please will you look at My little piece of writing? My story or my poem That I’ve written – it’s exciting! When you do will you also Give comments and a rating? So I’ll get an idea whether It flows or it’s grating. It’s really very helpful For both writer and poet, To be told they have talent – ‘Specially if they don’t know it. A few well-chosen comments Can really make a difference To someone who is struggling And showing great persistence. So please will you read it And tell me what you think? For I’ll be very grateful, And you’ll help your own writink!
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