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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1060927  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The girl I loved
my memories of her..i want to share. please read and review
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I loved a girl
when I was young
there was joy abound
every song she sung.

She was pretty
she was a rose
and i went red
when she came too close.

Her heart so pure
her words so kind
I could tell her even if
I was a blind.

My heart raced
everytime she smiled
and nothing felt bad
Nothing vile.

I loved her then
I miss her now
but I know we'll meet
someday, somehow.
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