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Please--NO NEW REVIEWS OR RATINGS. This piece is one I value as an early effort. I'm so grateful for the number of reviews it has already received since it was written in 2006. I keep it as is to show me how I started vs where I am now. Thanks for reading this piece. I'm always delighted to have new visitors. Just no more reviews or ratings. Warmest thanks. Crossing Over It may look like there is no one here beneath these stoic white sheets. Look here at this tall sliver of an old man. He hardly breaks the swell of bedclothes in this bed that overwhelms the spare cubicle, a wretched holding cell for the dying. His furious eyes and rude grimace long gone Soon he'll leave these frail remains. His weathered fingers pluck pluck plucking at the bedclothes even as he sleeps. His mouth curls. He dreams of soaring with the baseball over second base and swaying ever so slightly in tandem with the rocking chair on the old porch whose wooden planks groan under the weight of too many feet. His limbs worn and gray like the tree limbs the forest calls down around him. His toes turn blue to signal his flight. Once a bold perplexing force, like the Colorado River raging down a dark canyon, a rebellious vine reaching for the sky. Unstoppable. Now his utterances are incoherent. His shallow breaths engage in a narrow race with the disappearing sun. His fluid eyes refocus one last time. Then, like an intrepid old boat slowly groaning out to sea, he is gone.
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