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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1069632  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Thirst
Mou, I was really thirsty, in a bad mood, and too lazy to get up and get a glass of water.
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a deepening thirst
raw throat cursed
sharp pain digging
not at all forgiving
tightly clenched jaw
neck scratched raw
an obscure pulse
instinctive convulse
an intensified frown
tears pour down
by and by I wonder why
such a strange reason to cry
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