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Please--NO NEW REVIEWS OR RATINGS. This piece is one I value as an early effort. I'm so grateful for the
number of reviews it has already received. I keep it to show me how I started vs where I am now. Thanks for visiting and reading this piece. I'm always delighted to have new visitors. Just no more reviews or ratings. Thanks so much ! The sun climbs up over the trees forcing itself on the sleeping landscape. Autos, like a colony of large ants, crawl along the road plowed down to black ice. The warming sun transforms the slick dark macadam into a polished aluminum track. Through the window that is my early morning portal I watch the trees, soldier-like, saluting the arrival of another day, and all the days before this, that like the pages of my book, close one after another. Making our way down the driveway with shovels, we work to rid ourselves of the magnificent whiteness that is our prison. The scorching wind whirling and singing Our shovels scrape the macadam, exposing a coal black exit. The birds of winter laugh as we dig our way out of paradise to race back to civilization.
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