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breaking free
A five stanza linking poem in the pensée form.
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faintly
abrupt failing
falling towards nothingness
fatigue building walls around hell
my daily life turned sour

bitter
this taste somewhere
leads to a welcoming place
I remain listless to react
fearing still its power

wordless
they are spit free
somehow the venom weakens
my strength is virtue undaunted
draws nearer to my heart

prison
walls are freedom
when I learn to tie the ropes
my ascension is unhampered
liberty smiles at last

faintly
sudden success
rising towards completeness
energy breaks walls around hell
my daily life turned sweet




breaking free
26 march, 2006
(pensée form)
© Copyright 2006 alfred booth, wanbli ska (UN: troubadour at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
alfred booth, wanbli ska has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
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