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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Erotica >> ID #1094425  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Bath Time Desire
An erotic poem of a bath time fantasy
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Bath Time Desire

I watch you
As you slowly undress
First removing your top
You whip it carelessly over your head
As it falls in a pile on the floor

Turning your attention to your skirt
You unzip and slowly wriggle it down
Over your pert ass
Down your long sexy legs
Till it rests to a stop at your feet
I stare mouth open
At the beauty before me
I can honestly say I’ve never seen
Such a voyeuristic show

Oblivious to my presence
You unclip your bra
Exposing your naked back defined
As the garment floats gently to the ground

You turn around confronting me
With those perfect breasts
Young
Supple
Teasingly you stroke and grope them
Making your nipples hard
As you admire yourself in the mirror
You don’t even know I’m here

Finally you put your hands to your hips
Sliding your hands over the thin straps of your black lace g
Barely covering your innocence
As you slip them down your milky white thighs

Still facing the mirror
You run your fingers
Stroking your clit
As a cheeky smile crosses your beautiful face
Considering your bath time fantasy

You step into the hot steamy bath
Lowering yourself in to the mass of soft lathery bubbles
Enveloping your sexy young form

I step closer for a better look
As you run your hands over your body
Stroking
Caressing
Paying particular attention to your perfect breasts and tight young slit

You part your legs slightly
As you delve into the goodness between your thighs
Thrusting a finger, then two
Into your sweet wet pussy

With your eyes tightly closed you imagine
Your dream
Your fantasy
As your hand continues to explore the beauty inside
Your arousal grows
You begin to pant and moan
Lost in another place
A place of pleasure and desire
A place of sexual ecstasy

Carried away in the moment
I approach and kneel down by your bath side
Mirroring your naked form with my hands
Brushing away the flirting bubbles
To reveal more of your lushness
You’re gorgeous

Braver now
I slide my hand over your penetrating hand
Edging it away so that I may touch
The treasure between your thighs
Still your eyes remain closed as I pleasure you

Slowly the panting becomes more rapid
The moans more erratic
You bite gently on your bottom lip
As your climax begins to build
Eagerly you thrust your tender hole forcefully against my hand
Seeking something more
Something I’m only too happy to supply

Quickly removing clothing I join my desire
The ample luxurious bath perfect for the culmination of the planned seduction
I slide my erect member deep into your welcoming hole
Immediately moans turn to screams
As I thrust lustfully against you
Becoming faster and faster
Your white milky juices dripping as I glide in and out of you
A perfect sensation

Time passes all too quickly
As you scream out in ecstasy
To the mutual climax of our encounter

Moments pass
Exhausted you open your eyes
Instincts fear runs through me
As you looks straight through me
You seems dazed
Confused
Was that really real
As realisation hits me
A smile crosses my face
A perfect contrast
To the perplexity that fills yours
What can I say?
I guess sometimes it’s great to be dead
© Copyright 2006 Byron Quinn (UN: byronquinn at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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