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 My World Revolves Around You Rated:
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 Just a poem I wrote about a lost love of mine. Meant to be read by two speakers.
by: Unperfect Perfection View snowbunnie333's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: snowbunnie333 [Offline / Private] Avg Rating: (1)  
Where are you right now

Can't you tell me where you've been

Are you sitting at your desk

Chewing anxiously at your pink eraser

Or walking across the beach

Wading through the cool water at sunset

Where are you right now

It's been so long since I've seen you, my love




Where are you right now

Could you give me just one hint

Are you lying on your giant bed

Reminescing of moments that we've shared

Or leaning against the deck of your house

Counting the myriad stars in the sky

Or sitting on that old wooden chair

Fingers flying over the keys of your computer

Where are you right now

It's been so long, so painfully long




Do you remember to think about me

What do you remember about me

Do you remember the walks we used to take

Do you remember the rumors we used to break

Do you remember the laughs, the smiles

Do you remember the jokes in French class

Do you remember to think about me

Or am I a lost memory of your dormant past




Do you remember to think about me

Or have you simply moved on

Do you recall the times people accused us of dating

Do you recall how embarassed I was

When Evan reminded you of my apparent crush on you

Do you recall when we slowdanced at the first rec night

Do you remember to think about me

Or has it been so long that you've forgotten




Is it really that hard to ask

To simply keep in touch with me

Send me a friendly letter or a postcard

Email me on a weekly basis at the least

A private instant message session whenever you can

A care package of memories to put a smile on my face

Is it really that hard to ask

Just for you to remember I'm still there for you




Is it really that hard to ask

For you to come back home

Pack up the car with enough supplies

For two weeks of pure fun, just you and me

Enough food for one candlelight picnic lunch

Just one day, one sunset is all I want

Is it really that hard to ask

If I could just look at your lovely face again




Can't you tell I need you now

To piece together my broken heart

You've hurt me once before

You can't afford to mess it up again

It kills me everyday to know I won't see you

Life is empty with the void that only you can fill

Can't you tell I need you now

My world revolves around you



Can't you tell I need you now

I'm cradling my pierced heart in shaking hands

So many nights I've thought about you

Thinking about how much I love you

I pray to God that I'll find you once more

So that all of our days will be filled with happiness

Can't you tell I need you now

My world revolves around you

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