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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Action/Adventure >> ID #1100315  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The Little Submarine
An entry for the Spinning Nouns Contest
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The little submarine so envied
other members of the warship breed,
so much better equipped
the mighty battleship,
possessing all that power and speed,

until it was entrusted the task
of slipping under the water's mask
to deliver a blow
to the foe from below
bringing much glory in which to bask.
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