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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Other >> ID #1101833  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Ice Didn't Melt Fast Enough
Writer's Cramp: a Villanelle about ice.
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Avg Rating: (6)
Frozen; unable to stray
Surrounded by this solid mass
Ice waiting to melt away

Zen, in rhythmic silence all pray
Not a single nudge can harass
Frozen; unable to stray

Colors seep a miserly gray
Wisdom only a fool would surpass
Ice waiting to melt away

Cold scorns, not allowing to decay
Leaving from time of the pasts
Frozen; unable to stray

Mirror images not clear to display
Muddied is the glass
Ice waiting to melt away

Dying slowly like a broken-winged Faye
These words could be the last
Frozen; unable to stray
Ice waiting to melt away
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