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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Experience >> ID #1106201  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Hollow Girl
It's a poem about low self esteem.
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I am hollow
like a bowl, receptive to what you want
pour into me your desires
your dreams
your hate
and I will be that, I can do that, just
don't ask me to be myself
please
I tried and only ended up hollow
like this bowl, convave and
cracked at the base

Please use me,
see how I curve to your wishes
wants, lusts
Notice how I stand
make me your whore
make me your saint
If I do not please you, break, melt and mold me
into what pleases you
because that is what will only please me,
bringing pleasure to you
being what you want me to be
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