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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1107417  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
an experiment in chat
a poem of sorts written in realtime in a chatroom
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an experiment in chat

(I was sitting in chat all by myself and thought of the time differences between the scattered members of .... and I thought how difficult it must be to love someone on the other side of the world, how difficult to co-ordinate the speaking of words of love, the not knowing what is transpiring over there, can she talk, is she busy, that type of thing. So I wrote something for all those who suffer from this condition - I hope you find a solution. Regards, ghost)



System Msg: ghost has joined Lobby on Sat Nov 26, 2005 6:53 pm
ghost [6:53pm]: on a lonely weekend afternoon
ghost [6:53pm]: she waits
ghost [6:54pm]: she thinks
ghost [6:55pm]: the time must come soon
ghost [6:55pm]: .
ghost [6:55pm]: the screen stays blank
ghost [6:56pm]: she sits
ghost [6:56pm]: she stares
ghost [6:57pm]: damn
ghost [6:58pm]: the screen stays blank forever
ghost [6:58pm]: she sits
ghost [6:58pm]: she stares
ghost [6:59pm]: there is no lover
ghost [6:59pm]: .
ghost [6:59pm]: an endless flow of minutes
ghost [7:00pm]: she wants
ghost [7:00pm]: she longs
ghost [7:00pm]: damn
ghost [7:00pm]: .
ghost [7:01pm]: the endless flow of minutes ticking
ghost [7:01pm]: she dreams
ghost [7:01pm]: she dies
ghost [7:05pm]: and ends it now by clicking
System Msg: ghost has left Lobby on Sat Nov 26, 2005 7:06 pm
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