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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1108510  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
A Small Memo
Tantalizing love... and everlasting commitment...
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To: You

I can feel my breaths surrounding your name
And in every wink of darkness I feel your lips
And as I open my eyes, They vanish.
My heart gains pace, As I stand in a place
Between forever and never
I have had my heartbreak, and I've had my pleasure..
I am ready to close one door and open another..
I have cheated and lied, before I know..
And other hearts were broken, like water on ice..
And when the pain of our love turns to pleasure
And our commitment grows with each tensure
I want you to know that even in doubt
I will be with you, even when I'm without
And like a stone in the river, we'll roll slowly
And hit a few other stones, making our lifes lowly
But at the end will be the ocean,
A sea of love and sweet devotion
Forever in debt to you I swear
And once in pain I did declare
I Love You, I love You, I love you...

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