Sign up now for a
Free Email Account &
your own Online
Writing Portfolio!
Username:
Password:  
Sponsored Items

Click Here To Bid  

Read a Newbie
Badges
Reviewing
Presented To:
Gabriella

Testimonials
Tell a Friend
Know someone who'd
like this page?

Email Address:

Optional Comment:

Who's Online?
Members: 484    
Guests: 1402    

   
Total Online Now: 1886    
Writing.Com Time

Tuesday
May 29, 2012
7:42pm EDT


  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Writing >> ID #1109342  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
My Monchielle
My first attempt at a Monchielle, a poetic form designed by Jim T. Henriksen.
Rated:
E
by
Avg Rating: (7)
My Monchielle
By Doris Ruth Mackey


Here is my Monchielle
Designed by Mister H.
Four stanzas set the pace,
The first line, always the same
In each and every case.


Here is my Monchielle.
I’ll try to make him proud
And follow every rule.
Tisn’t very easy,
Twasn’t taught in school.


Here is My Monchielle.
I think I’ve got it right,
Six syllables, five lines,
A rhyme ends three and five
I'm sure it will be fine.


Here is my Monchielle.
I’m trying very hard
To make this come out right.
It’s been a true challenge
And took me all the night.





Title: Monchielle
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
According to Shadowpoetry.com, the Monchielle is developed by Jim T. Henriksen. It is a recent developed form, as on a different website the example he wrote was dated November 7th 2005. A new form to play with - still not an easy one.


The guidelines:

The poem contains out of 4 stanzas
Each stanza has five lines.
Every line has six syllables
Every first line is repeated and comes back as the first line of all the other stanzas.
Line 3 and 5 rhyme, in every stanza.
The rhyme scheme: Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml


© Copyright 2006 dmack (UN: mdmackey at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
dmack has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log In To Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!

All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!