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In early childhood,
as muted as a ghost, I burrowed under the tables to doodle and make up ditties, dodging pain, harsh words, shattering crystal, a family's fading with Daddy's absence when he moved to his mother's, and Mama, smoothing the wrinkles on her skirt, said: "She needs him more," but one day, Daddy knocked on the door and asked for his radio, while I fidgeted under the table in the hallway. Mama, shoving him a cardboard box, squeaked: "Won't you see your daughter?" The place grew still until Daddy said: "Ain't important." Ever since that day, I've been trying to improvise my importance. -------------------------------- Prompt: Most of us, as children, had a secret hiding place or favorite spot to get away from our families and our ordinary lives. It might have been a spot in the woods, a fort in the yard or basement, a roof of the house, under the bed - or maybe it was just in your room reading a book as a means of escape. Write a poem about your place, and, if possible, a paticular event/incident you recall that made you seek it out.
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