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Content Rating Notice: XGC -- May Contain Extreme Graphic Content
Only For: 18 and Older, Not Offended
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Club Sex!
Sex with a stranger
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Mia was told about this place by her friend but didn’t know if she should visit it. She stood in her closet wondering what she should wear. Her friend, Shanice calls.
“Hey chick what are you wearing tonight?”
“I’m standing in my closet now trying to figure that out.”
“Why are you in your closet? I told you it was a pajama party so you need to walk over to where you keep your unmentionables and then decide.”
“Are you really going in your pajamas?”
“Yes I am wearing a black see through teddy.”
“I can’t believe that.”
“Well believe it. I will be at your house in 15 minutes so be dressed.”

Mia walks to her top drawer and opens it. She pulls out a few nightgowns then decides to wear her pink lace teddy. She puts it on with her fuzzy pink high heel house shoes. She reaches in her closet and puts on her black trench coat. She can’t believe she let her best friend talk her into something so crazy. She waits for her downstairs.

They reach the club at about 10 o’clock. The line is flowing out the front door. She didn’t think it would be this packed. She saw some strange things standing there in line. There were plenty of couples, men and women and women and women. She really hoped she didn’t see any men with men.

They finally got to the front door and there was a very fine bouncer standing there waiting to frisk them. Shanice smiles at him then says.
“What you plan on doing with that big stick of yours?”
“Are you talking about the one on my hip or the one in my pants?”
“I’ll take which ever one you’re willing to share.”

He smiles at her and tells the cashier to let her in for free. Then he looks at Mia.
“So do you have some constructive way to get into the club at no cost as well?”

Mia turns away from him and slowly grinds her behind up against his crotch.
“No not really but I am ready for my frisking.”
“Umm that’s what I love to hear.”

He rubs her body down very slowly. She turns to him and he bends down to her lips and whispers.
“Be careful in there things get very wild so be prepared.”
“You just make sure you come find me on your next break.”

He waves to the cashier.
“I’ve got her covered.”

They pass through and look around the room. The dance floor is filling up so they decide to find a table. They sit off to the side under a palm tree. A dark chocolate brother in nothing but a Speedo approaches their table.
“Can I take your order ladies?”
“Why are you on the menu?”
“I can be if that’s what you want.”
“That sounds intriguing but seeing as we just got here, let me have a Fuzzy Navel and for my girl an Apple Martini.”
“I’ll be right back.”
The women both let out a low whistle as he walks away then laughs.

“I can’t believe you brought me here Shanice.”
“What’s to believe? We are here to have a great time. I plan on having just that.”

The waiter returns with their drinks. They enjoy just looking at the different couples dancing. Juvenile’s song Slow Motion comes on and Shanice jumps up.
“Girl this is my song I have to dance.”
“Well might I dance with you?”
Shanice turns around to see a tall dark and handsome brother standing in front of her.
“We may have to do a little more than dance tonight.”
“I’m game if you are.”

She looks at Mia and squeals.
“Girl don’t sit here too long, you hear me?”
“You go on and enjoy your dance.”

Mia finishes her drink and motions for the waiter to bring her another.
“Fuzzy Navels are what you fancy huh?”

She looks up not recognizing the voice but definitely the accent. There stood the finest darkest brother she had ever seen. He had to be at least 6 foot. He was bald with light brown eyes. She could see his dimples when he smiled. His chest was bare with a fair amount of muscles and a six pack stomach. He wore a pair of black silk pajamas with black house shoes. He had a white necklace made of pooka shells. He was simply breathtaking.
“Uh yes that is my drink of the evening.”
“Do you mind if I join you?”
“No I would be offended if you didn’t.”

He sits down next to her in the booth. He smelled of her favorite cologne Drakkar.
“You smell wonderful.”
“Why thank you. My scent can’t even compare to your beauty.”
“Careful flattery may get you somewhere.”
“I hope so.”
He waves his hand in the air and a topless waitress walks over.
“What can I get you this evening?”
“I’ll have a Hypnotic and Hennessy please.”

She saunters back to the bar to fetch his drink. The waitress brings the drink shortly thereafter and he turns his attention to Mia.
“So beautiful what is your name?”
“Mia.”
“Ah, such a beautiful name to fit a beautiful body. My name is John.”
“It’s very nice to meet you John. Do you come here often?”
“No actually this is my first time. What about yourself?”
“This is definitely my first time. So I notice you have an accent where are you from?”
“I am from Jamaica.”
“Ooh how sexy.”
“Why thank you. So where is your husband?”
“I don’t know maybe with your wife.”
“That’s funny I don’t have a wife.”
“Nor do I have a husband.”
“Very creative I like that. So now that the preliminaries are out of the way shall we dance?”
“I’d like that very much.”

He leads her to the dance floor and they start to groove to Ciera’s My Goodies. He is turned on by the sexual sway of her hips. She too is impressed by his sexual dance. Just the fact that he is Jamaican has got her totally turned on. The music slows to the beat of Silk’s Freak Me. He puts his hands on her hips and pulls her close to him. She puts her arms around his neck.
“So you ever had a man lick you up and down till you said stop?”
“I can’t say that I have. Are you offering?”
“Well you are very direct.”
“Isn’t that what you were being? Don’t tell me you’re shy now.”
“I’m anything but shy.”
“So what was your purpose of coming to this club tonight? It was to get lucky am I right?”
“I’d say my luck has gotten better since I met you.”
“So you didn’t answer my question about the licking proposition.”
“So you took it as a proposition?”
“Was I overstepping?”
“No there’s nothing I would enjoy better than licking you up and down all night or until you said stop.”
“I don’t think I would tell you to stop.”
“That makes things interesting. So why don’t we cut to the chase.”
“Are you chasing me now cause I’m not running.”
“Okay. How about we take this upstairs?”
“What’s upstairs?”
“A room and us if you want it to be.”
“So why don’t you lead the way.”

They move to the back of the club and up the secret stairs. He looks down at his key and it reads #69. She can hear the sexual noises coming from different rooms down the hallway. They finally reach their room and he opens the door. The sweet sounds of Ron Isley’s, ‘Lucky Charm’ swept through the room. The room is decorated with an Indian palace theme. The bed is in the center of the room and looked like a huge pillow. There were huge curtains surrounding the bed. The lighting was that of a red hue. She walks into the room and he locks the door behind them.
“This is impressive.”
“Yes it is.”
“So what I find interesting is that you already had a key to this room. So getting lucky was on the agenda this evening.”
“Well actually my friend purchased the room for me just in case.”
“So are you going to kiss me?”
“You don’t miss a beat do you?”
“No need to beat around the bush. We are both here for one thing and one thing only.”
“Actually I had more than one thing on my mind.”
“It’s always good to have a list.”

He moves toward her and kisses her lips. She grabs his bald head and returns the kiss. His hands move down to her hips. He backs her up to the bed.
“Take your clothes off.”
“What if I’m not ready?”

He licks his middle finger then slides it underneath her teddy past her thong. He begins to finger her.
“I think you are ready.”

Her eyes close as she savors his touch. He stokes her kitty until she comes.
“Now I’m ready.”

He pushes her straps down her shoulders then pushes her teddy down to her waist. He cups her breasts and teases them with his tongue. Sweet moans escape her lips. She reaches down and massages the huge bulge in his pants. He pushes her teddy the rest of the way down along with her thong. She kicks off her shoes. He steps away from her to get a better view of her nakedness.
“You love, are breathtaking.”
“It looks to me that you are now overdressed for the party.”

He unties his pajama bottoms and lets them fall around his ankles. Her breath is caught in her throat at the sight of him. She wonders at that moment if she had bitten off way more than she could chew. He notices her apprehensiveness and walks toward her. He whispers in her ear.
“Don’t worry sweet Mia I will be gentle.”

He lifts her up then lays her down on the bed. He does as he said he would and licks her all over her body. When he reaches her toes her body was tingling. He spreads her legs and can see her dripping with anticipation. ‘Keep it Flowin’ is on the stereo and that’s just what he had planned on doing.

He lies in between her legs and licks her pearl tongue. She raises up from the bed and looks down at him. She can’t believe he is performing this sexual act on her. He places a hand on her stomach to calm her down and she lies back down. He is wicked with his tongue and has her coming in no time. She grips the sheets around her to gain composure but it doesn’t help.

He lets her rest from his sweet torture for a moment. Only long enough to put on a condom. He lies down on top of her.
“Are you okay?”
“I’ll let you know once you enter my wetness. You have quite a bit there to offer. I don’t know if I can handle all that.”
“You’ll do fine, like I said I will be gentle.”

He enters her tight walls and closes his eyes to calm his own self down. Her warmth is impeccable. She grips his back and bites his shoulder.
“Oh John!”
“I know love I feel it too.”

He gives her a few more inches very slowly careful not to lose control. They engage in some very enticing yet slow intercourse. He savors ever inch of her body inside and out. The slow grind of his hips mimics his moves on the dance floor. She had never experienced such wonderful bliss. The fact that he was a total stranger made it even more intriguing.

He sat up on his knees and put her right leg on his chest. He then took her left foot and began to lick her toes again. Her eyes rolled to the back of her head. He was driving her wild and she couldn’t get enough. Each stroke was very gentle and she rode the waves to ecstasy. They made love for hours and the sheets were wet with sweat.

In the fourth hour they decided to take things to the shower. In the bathroom was a Jacuzzi tub. John ran the water in the tub and they stepped into the glass shower while they waited for the bath water to finish. He washed her body and she washed his. Then they began to kiss again. He turned her around and pressed his body against her backside. He spread her arms out on the tile wall of the shower and covered her hands with his. He kissed her neck again and entered her from behind. She shivered at his gesture. She couldn’t get enough of this man.

He grinded against her ample behind giving her mounds of pleasure yet again. He held onto her hips to control his strokes careful not to go too far. He felt as though he was floating on a sexual cloud with this woman. They went at it for another twenty minutes before moving to the tub.

He got in the tub first and then she entered. She moved close to him and decided she wanted to try to ride him. He was pleased that she was willing to try to take control. He knew he was a lot to handle. She mounted him carefully and his head dropped back a little. Every time he felt her warmth he felt as though he was in heaven.

He put his hands on her hips to carefully guide her up and down his staff. She kissed his neck and closed her eyes as they both rode the waves of wonton. She came over and over again and was amazed at his stamina. On a down stroke she just sat there not moving. She stroked his chest as she listened to his heartbeat.
“You are something else John.”
“I could say the same thing about you my little Mia. I take it you are enjoying yourself?”
“Yes I am. What about yourself.”
“I have been on cloud nine the entire night. I am glad we both decided to try this club tonight.”
“Touché.”
“So let’s dry off and continue this session in the bedroom.”

They get out of the tub and she dries him off first then he dries her off with his tongue. When he is finished he picks her up and she wraps her legs around his waist. He pushes upward and enters her again. She grabs his bald head as if holding on for dear life and they go at it again froggy style. He hops toward the bed and lies down again.

They make love for a couple more hours then fall asleep with him still hard inside her. They wake up the next morning and continue their sex fest until mid afternoon. They finally check out and exchange phone numbers.
“Where is your car?”
“I actually came with my best friend, so I don’t even have a ride home.”
“I could take you home, if you want me to.”
“I would love that, thank you.”
They hop into his Avalanche and ride to her house. They arrive at her house in 20 minutes.
“Would you like to come in?”
“I’m afraid, Mia, that if I come in I will want to be in between those thighs again.”
“You say that as though it is a bad thing.”
“Not at all but I have to be to work in a couple of hours. So I must go home shower and change.”
“So is this goodbye for good? A wonderful one night stand?”
“No I will definitely call you when I get off work tonight. That is if you want me too.”
“I would love that.”
“Great until then love.”

He kisses her lips and she walks into her house wondering when will he call. Her phone rings and its Shanice.
“Where did you disappear to last night troll? I left a million messages on your cell.”
“I had the most wonderful evening last night. All I can say is thank you for taking me to that club last night.”
“So spill the beans.”
“In due time but first I need to change and take a nap. I’m a little worn out.”
“Okay troll but I want the full 411 when you get situated.”
“Sure I’ll call you later.”

Mia’s phone rings at 11pm.
“Hello.”
“Are you ready for round 3?”
“Yes.”
“Great I’ll be there in 30 minutes.”
“I’ll be waiting.”

Brown Sugar ☺
9-25-04


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