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Hurt
A short poem I wrote about my feelings after the end of a relationship.
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This item contains Edit Points (EPs). EPs are the red numbers (~#~) that you see within this item. The Author has placed these at various points in order to gain detailed feedback. Readers may click any EP to leave comments about that particular point in the item.

Arms to hold me with~0~
Lips to comfort me with~1~
Eyes to love me with~2~
Hands to gentle me with~3~

Where are you?~4~
Have I lost you?~5~
Will I find you?~6~
Did I ever know you?~7~

Words to hurt me with~8~
Smiles to punish me with~9~
Tears to dirty me with~10~
Love to kill me with~11~

Do you care for me?~12~
Do you hate me?~13~
Is this real?~14~ Do you even see me?~15~
Did I ever love you?~16~ Really?~17~
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