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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1140112  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
out walking under the giants
"love" poem; not different but not the same of course
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out walking under the giants.
singing in soul, silently wondering.
the lights are just coming on but
it is still light. the street--
there are people, all kinds
of people on the street.
my throat is dry so i enter
a bar. stale beer stale drunks--
everyone and their several
shot glasses their half-full amber
glasses in front of them. i order scotch.
the burn is good at night.
especially this still seeing night.
another. warming. leave
a five. as i turn to
leave glittering eyes beckon
like purple leaves--blue eyes.
there is a smile between us,
myself and blue eyes. blue eyes
remind me of infinitely calm
sea beneath yellow sun.
this i tell her and she leans in
to hear--take her hand
and lead her out.
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