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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Inspirational >> ID #1143302  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Sandcastles
I wrote this poem a long time ago; it still reflects how I feel about life.
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I built a castle of dreams
of hopes
of fantasies
of unrealities
with my tired, weary, hopeful hands
I was hoping the temperament of the sea
with a cruel wave
of reality and judgment
would not wash my fragile hopes away
like a scolding parent
but to no avail
wet, mortal sand took its sacred place
so I built another castle
with all the strength I could gather
when I spotted the huge wave once more
looking me in the eye
with its fierceness and mightiness.
I stood in its path
and with great fear
it retreated
and left my castle to stand
undisturbed.
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