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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1154876  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
~Changing Eyes
She could see the woe in his eyes, my husband's eyes... a tritina form.
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Changing Eyes
She looked into her husband's sad eyes
Feeling her own sorrow in that moment
Knowing that things were ending

She sadly knew that this was the ending
She could see the woe in his eyes
If only she could erase this moment

Arising again in another moment
She might be able to change this grave ending
But she couldn't deny what showed in his eyes

Eyes tell a moment, and shed their tears at the ending





          The Tritina is a ten- lined poem, divided over three tercets and a single line. It is related to the sestina, as it uses three end words that are repeated in the poem. In the last line however all three the words are used."Tritina.
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