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Our Love
Written for a friend's single mother,please help me review
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*Note: This poem was written for a friend's single mother. I need all the reviews for this piece because it would be read out on her birthday.


Planting a tree, I whisper to the sand,
My love for you, a confession made at hand;
I am a running wave, your heart my destination,
It is the burning land I wash with perfection.

I am the smile that enhances your grace,
My satisfaction resides in brightening your motherly face.
You are a candle that burns away to give light;
You battle for our sake, fighting a lonely fight.

Our love water pure,comes where the winds breathe,
Where the plants of life sprout their newest leaves,
The Creator sends them from high Above,
The Angels come to strengthen our love.

The ballad of your smile makes the song of life flow,
The sun of words causes withered heart grow;
Your smile makes my life bright,
Cuddles me in its tender hug and keeps the flame of my life alight.

May Almighty Allah protect and bless us!
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