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Garbled thoughts crowd in my head, too many items to create. It's just I never meet the bar to get a five-star rate. I don't know how to rhyme my words, Nor how to make my stanzas flow. Syllable count's always a beat off, Which seems quite far from pro. Most times I end up rambling, and using words to fill up space. That way, my works seem much longer, While still holding a steady pace. I dont use punctuation good, and sometimes I mispeall a word. I may add lines that mean nothing, and think toesocks are absurd. I feel three stanzas means too short, while eight is obviously stretched. And more often than not, I do rhyme words that seem far fetched. Then I use a sudden ending, One abrupt that randomly stops. It tends to leave readers hanging
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