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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1186321  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Drowning
Good Relationship Gone Bad. [More of a song than a poem.]
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Tonight I will drown
You and your memories
Won't break the surface

Watch them fall
To the ground,
Breaking apart

I'm drowning
In all of you
Alone in the shadows
And I can't feel the same

This heart
It still beats on
But that doesn't mean
Anything when you're already gone

[I'll never forgot how
It felt to be left so alone
You were never there...]

I'm drowning
In all of you
Alone in the shadows
And I can't feel the same

I'm sick of all the lies
I can't believe I didn't see all the signs in your eyes,
So bright and strong.
They were buring like a forest fire

I'm drowning
In all of you
Alone in the shadows
And I can't breathe
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