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Torn
My emotional turmoil after the departure of my out-of-state crush...
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TORN
(January 16, 2007)
Third place winner in "Invalid Item

You swept me away, turned my world upside down
And now that you've fled I'm starting to drown
Emotions rage within me so strong
I'm no more the same I was all along
Can't quiet the thoughts of you on my mind
Can't dry out the tears that pour out and grind
The flesh and whatever is left of me here
All I am is a hopeless being of fear
I no longer exist in your world anymore
I don't want to exist at all that's for sure
For I'll always be eaten away and torn
Knowing you dropped me never to return
And no matter how hard I try to battle
This emotional war will never settle
All I'll be is lost, bruised, and dejected
For it's your fault this way I'm affected
I will never let go, I'll never move on
So might as well drown in this world and be gone

From my 1st book Pieces of Me



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