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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Teen >> ID #1205220  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
A Depressing Time
A kid that tries to attempt suicide
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Hes alone, and no one can figure him out.
And he thinks he knows for sure without a doubt,
no one really cares about him.
Hes afraid, no one under stands him.

When you look at him,this is what you see,
Some one who needs to pop into reality.
His heart he wants to tear,
But he really doesnt care.

His grades are in the toilet,
His homework, he wants to boil it.
Teachers come down on him pretty hard,
His girlfriend, just broke his heart.

They found him in the closet,
This time he lost it.
He went way to far.
Hanging from a bar

But only for a short time,
They were able to revive him.
He got some help,
It really helped himself.

His grades arent in th toilet,
Homework, doesnt want to boil it.
His teachers arent hard,
His new girlfriend wont break his heart.


Another one of my first poems.
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