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Negligent Savior
My God is a negligent savior...is yours?
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"Negligent Savior"
1-24-2007

My God is a negligent savior.
Distant, unreachable, yet not forgotten.
Praying in a hallowed building,
Will not bring you salvation.
Turn inward and find a God worth the worship.
I ended up with a negligent savior,
What does that say about myself?

Note of Interest: This poem was created for a creative writing exercise where you write "My _____ is an adjective noun" and you pull the adjective and noun out of a bag full of ones. It's quite interesting how mine turned out, eh?
© Copyright 2007 Chris & Christina McCoy (UN: silverfyre at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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